a poem by a senior.. me...:P

how many days till our graduation?

how many days till we part?

though it seems that it's too long

time unfolds us, it's time to start

day by day, bits by bits

it's drawing near, yet we dont't care

life goes on, time flies by

but it's getting nowhere near there

we take our time filling up forms

taking exams here and there

enjoying the new experiences

cherishing the simple moments shared

now's the time to bid farewell

we're passing by the finish line

marching and taking our diplomas

when will it happen again?

life's too short so don't waste time

cherish the moment spent in school

cause it may never happen again.....

what do you think???? is it okay??? my first poem after taking 3 long years of break time...:P

comment on it.. please....